Martial Arts Master - Chapter 638

[Part 4 Summary and Request for Leave and Monthly Pass]

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At the beginning of this summary, I wanted to praise myself. Since everyone didn’t see it, I could only point it out and praise myself. From the back of the third part, I was trying a new technique to write the inner feelings of the characters. The new technique is that most of the time, instead of doing an inner monologue or direct emotional elaboration, it expresses the heart through pure actions, expressions, language, environment and atmosphere, and makes the characters’ emotions. The psychological drama is left blank and appears more tense.

You can read the last chapter of the third part, the description of Lou Cheng when he left school. I didn’t write about what he recalled at all, how sad, emotional and sigh. There is no such a word in the whole chapter, I just wrote it. What he saw, his actions, but just like this, that deep and implicit feeling naturally accumulated, until the words “Goodbye Songcheng” burst out at the end.

I’m not a professional, and I’m semi-literate in writing. I can only rely on reading books and pondering it myself. Anyway, I may have used this technique before, but I don’t have such a clear understanding. I think it is the most suitable for deep, restrained and sentimental people. Psychological drama, which does not have a monologue until the final burst, can be very powerful, because the joy is exploding and the lowness is continuous.

Therefore, in the low point of Lou Cheng, before the chapter “For Me”, I only wrote a few sentences from the beginning to the end of his and Keke’s psychological activities, all of which were driven by actions, language, expressions, etc. , the most satisfying scene is probably the scene where Lou Cheng is powerless to lean back and close his eyes after posting on Weibo. No need for other descriptions, no need for any description of psychological activities, all his emotions are on paper.

However, due to the lack of direct psychological drama, this way of writing will appear abrupt, intermittent, and not smooth enough in the transition of the scene, so that there is no sense of transition and foreshadowing in the middle.

How to solve this problem in the future, I haven’t thought of it yet, I can only continue to ponder (scratch my head).

Well, back to the fourth part, this is an important process of Lou Cheng’s psychological transformation to a master, and it is also the turning point of the whole book that I presume. It is the second part of connecting the past and the future. It is not long, but important enough.

For this story, I was ready to subscribe for 24 hours. Fortunately, everyone still believes in me. Maybe it is also numb to my willfulness. Most of the time, it has not declined, and That small part of the time, it’s up, up…

In addition, this section is also an in-depth excavation and fullness of the characters of Chengzi and Keke. Their ideas, their three views, and their personalities should be more three-dimensional than the previous three parts, and I think they are well written.

To be honest, before I started the book, I thought so, if the martial arts results are not good, then this is the end. Although Lou Cheng has not yet become a grandmaster, he is mentally and spiritually prepared. good.

But well, I am also a person who sometimes dislikes integrity in speech and body. I think so, but when I am a character design, more than 60% of the characters are super strong, and they are the super powers of the top professional competitions. Strong, so, I think, no matter whether the grades are good or not, I should write them down. Of course, the grades are good now, and I am very satisfied.

It’s an old rule, I have a day off on August 1. This writing is very stressful and tiring. I have to sort out the third and last part of Martial Arts. Let’s see you at 12:30 on August 2, the fifth Ministry “The first dream, will definitely arrive”!

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