Martial Arts Master - Chapter 319

[Take a leave of absence chapter 1 to find the feeling]

Since winning the championship in the youth competition, the sense of rhythm is a bit bad. To be precise, the sense of expectation and the plot cannot match. This is not a problem of spreading dog food, lol, on the contrary, the two dog food chapters of photos and questions, On the contrary, I am very satisfied, the details are full, the characters’ reactions are in line with the personality, and the characteristics are deepened, although it may not be liked by some people.

The problem with the sense of rhythm is that after winning the championship of the youth competition, the peak of the summer vacation plot is over, and the latter should be finished with a relatively short chapter. After a few chapters of dog food, it will quickly move to the next big plot, but the tail left in the front is too much. A lot, many things have to be explained, I have to write, interviews, apprenticeships, sect figures, special training, etc., except for the part where the master pretends to be forceful and enriches his personality, there is a feeling of being forced to write in other places. It didn’t create a good sense of expectation, and it lost a bit of the taste of plain and real interest. This is the improper arrangement of the plot that needs to be reviewed. Fortunately, relying on a relatively good foundation (bragging), it is still well written. It’s more interesting, and it doesn’t fall below the level.

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This month’s rankings love you addicted: the ex-husband is gentle, the chief sweet wife is too sultry Wife is difficult to flirt with: the president’s brother is good or bad, the president flirts with Aimo and other flowers bloom and falls in love with three thousand gold for revenge. Marriage and love: the fierce husband stops for a while. Ruthless love and doting wife addiction: Husband, don’t move!

Wife enjoys endless joy: Bullying the president will make you addicted and poisonous concubine: the evil king gently spoils the cute wife too delicious: president, please restrain the all-around soldier and report to the devil: the concubine is poisoned again, the ignorant youth love me, please don’t leave me differently Occupational career: close to the female leader, wealthy, powerful, petty, less powerful, forced to marry: husband is too fierce

Martial Dao Grandmaster

Since winning the championship in the youth competition, the sense of rhythm is a bit bad. To be precise, the sense of expectation and the plot cannot match. This is not a problem of spreading dog food, lol, on the contrary, the two dog food chapters of photos and questions, On the contrary, I am very satisfied, the details are full, the characters’ reactions are in line with the personality, and the characteristics are deepened, although it may not be liked by some people.

The problem with the sense of rhythm is that after winning the championship of the youth competition, the peak of the summer vacation plot is over, and the latter should be finished with a relatively short chapter. After a few chapters of dog food, it will quickly move to the next big plot, but the tail left in the front is too much. A lot, many things have to be explained, I have to write, interviews, apprenticeships, sect figures, special training, etc., except for the part where the master pretends to be forceful and enriches his personality, there is a feeling of being forced to write in other places. It didn’t create a good sense of expectation, and it lost a bit of the taste of plain and real interest. This is the improper arrangement of the plot that needs to be reviewed. Fortunately, relying on a relatively good foundation (bragging), it is still well written. It’s more interesting, and it doesn’t fall below the level.

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