Legend of the Great Sage - 1657. No updates, only notices

Maybe some friends don’t know yet. I have decided to read “The Great Sage” from start to end again, fill in all the holes, give an explanation to all important people who have appeared, and give “The Great Sage” an account. The perfect ending possible. So this time the change will be longer, so please be mentally prepared.

This is really a very difficult decision. The process of reading is very hard. Maybe when you read it, all you see are wonderful, all good, plain and bad, just skip it. And those friends who are particularly partial to me and have watched it several times, may not find it any embarrassment at all.

However, for me, this is a daunting challenge that has failed many times. Up to now, I am most afraid of rereading what I have written before. The only one I have read completely now is the original “Through the Druid”. Because what I see is always not exciting enough, not good enough, as small as a sentence-breaking problem, as large as the loss of the whole plot, it is like digging out my own dark history, and I am shameful and want to roll.

For example, the first sentence of the Qing Niu in the first chapter of “The Great Sage”, “Under the dark sky, the rolling mountains, like a giant beast lying on the ground, quietly wait for the dawn.”

“Well, “of” seems to be used too much, which makes this sentence seem too flat. Also, between “rolling mountains” and “like a giant beast”, shouldn’t you break the sentence? In order to adapt to The writing rhythm of the Internet article undermines the integrity of this sentence. Finally, after thinking, the word “的” is no problem. This sentence should really be flat, but the sentence shouldn’t be so broken. I thought it would be changed in the background. , No, I want to keep watching!”

Five minutes passed…

If it’s easier to tolerate this kind of verbal and subtly problem, the kind of character and plot problem is simply a kind of shame and suffering. It keeps reminding me of the huge mistakes I made in the first place, and then thinks of mine. The whole life…

But this time, I believe that I have become strong enough to overcome all these obstacles, draw nourishment from the failures in the past, and then become stronger, write better plots, and continue to approach “perfect”.

At the same time, I am also working hard to affirm myself, affirm the words I have written and the path I have traveled. After all, there is no me who struggled with pain and pursues perfection time and time again. There is no me who I am today, maybe even triumphant, I am not aware of the existence of these errors at all. No one’s life is smooth sailing, but no one’s life is only failure.

So, let you accompany me to suffer again. All those who chased the watch were angels with broken wings in their previous life. Who made the person who wrote this book a fool!